Friday, April 24, 2015

Daily Eating (Haiku) Comments

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Break-fast they call it
Fast it was because I slept
Break-sleep it should be
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Madathil Rajendran Nair
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Very nice and wise, thank you

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Bri Edwards 12 January 2017

i'm so sorry if too much eating gives you nightmares. and you need to buy a larger size suit......EVERY MONTH! ? bulimia might help. try it. ============================================== egg, over-easy; so what if stomach's queasy? first meal must be had. lunch or brunch? ok. time for day's second meal. energy for play! dinner? supper? same! must eat third time. don't be lame. eating: Homo sapiens' game. =================== thanks for a journey through one's day of supporting restaurants and grocery stores. think of THEM....next time you consider skipping a meal! don't just think of yourself! ! ! bri :)

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Nice haikus over eating in three beautiful morsels of three lines each. Now one must be ready to fast.

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Valsa George 03 May 2015

Quite interesting haikus.... I especially love the one on break fast!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 April 2015

Very nicely presented. Beautiful poem about daily eating. Thanks for sharing.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair

Madathil Rajendran Nair

Bombay, India
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