Daily Dose Comments

Kyle, I think this is a terrific start....I'd read it aloud to yourself a few times and try to 'hear' where the line breaks should be...also, proofread your work with a fine toothed comb...make sure you have no spelling errors and that you've used words in the right context. I do my best work from a position of anger....so, of course, I just love the theme of this poem. Keep up the good work.