Monday, March 24, 2008

Dahlia In The Window Comments

Rating: 3.3

Pale and translucent as pink lemonade,
the morning sun filtered its petals
to pure lightness;
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Caroline Misner
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Mary Gordley 26 March 2008

Lush with tribute to nature's beauty. Thanks

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William Jackson 24 March 2008

I can see the Dahlia as it tenuously unfolds. Great imagery here! Nice write.

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Kathryn Butterworth 24 March 2008

this poem is strengthened so much by the mortal twist of the gardener; and once again, some lovely imagery.

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