Words pointed and sharp, a dagger to the heart
Can not be recalled once they depart
Begging forgiveness at arguments end
Does not always the heart mend
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The testimony of truth travels in the vehicle of this poem. Very well written.10/10
wow i really liked this its simple and concise but the message is very clear good job linda!
I liked this with end rhyme. I took the liberty of rewriting some lines without rhyme to give you a different look. Words sharply pointed...heart daggers once departed, no recalling home hollow is the forgiveness begged at argument's end. The poem is excellent, my compliments.
One's thoughts.....and....therefore.....comments.....should....always....be measured!
A poignant poem which highlights the universal fact that 'Pen is mightier than sword'. Good Read Linda... regards - BHARAT
Love seeps from the wounds inflicted...............the single sentence is enough for the expression heart when hurt by the words unrelished, yet the reeks that fluffs making a blanket of shadow over the rungs of love, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing
Ummmm wow this is amazing! Bravo a million times. I really like this one it is short but I love it!
yes...words do kill... and leave a terrifying ghost of hatredness behind...well written piece, Linda...educative and meaningful...10