Monday, August 4, 2008

Daggers To The Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Words pointed and sharp, a dagger to the heart
Can not be recalled once they depart
Begging forgiveness at arguments end
Does not always the heart mend
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COMMENTS
Kesav Easwaran 05 December 2008

yes...words do kill... and leave a terrifying ghost of hatredness behind...well written piece, Linda...educative and meaningful...10

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The testimony of truth travels in the vehicle of this poem. Very well written.10/10

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Jessica Rosalie Smith 05 October 2008

wow i really liked this its simple and concise but the message is very clear good job linda!

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C H Sund 30 September 2008

I liked this with end rhyme. I took the liberty of rewriting some lines without rhyme to give you a different look. Words sharply pointed...heart daggers once departed, no recalling home hollow is the forgiveness begged at argument's end. The poem is excellent, my compliments.

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Chris Newlash 22 September 2008

This poem is excellent! Great job

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James B. Earley 16 August 2008

One's thoughts.....and....therefore.....comments.....should....always....be measured!

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Bharat B. Trivedi 11 August 2008

A poignant poem which highlights the universal fact that 'Pen is mightier than sword'. Good Read Linda... regards - BHARAT

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 August 2008

Love seeps from the wounds inflicted...............the single sentence is enough for the expression heart when hurt by the words unrelished, yet the reeks that fluffs making a blanket of shadow over the rungs of love, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Brooke Moran 09 August 2008

Ummmm wow this is amazing! Bravo a million times. I really like this one it is short but I love it!

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