Friday, May 16, 2008

Daggers In The Eyes Comments

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Some people
I saw
Some daggers in their eyes
A constant gaze
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Sadiqullah Khan
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M M 27 May 2008

Wow, emotion, strong ambivalent feelings, sharp sight of animosity into talking eyes, short verses which intensify the strength of the emotion and the meaning. Great.10

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Kesav Easwaran 23 May 2008

daggers all around...you are right sadiq! a sincere mind easily recognizes these daggers…glad you come out successfully at the end of your experiments with so many... a poem having a magical effect.

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Rani Turton 16 May 2008

This poem speaks of animosity and the powers unleashed by softer emotion; The poem is couched in terms that are unforgettable, one gets the impression that you are juggling with words, with the dexerity of the born poet. Thanks.

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