Dagger Of Love Comments

wow thats amazing! ! great job! keep on writing

an amazing poem, it has a rhythm with out rhyme, i like it! love is a blade..... awesome, love starr

'Docded... ' Okay, I'm old so, amI missing s.th. or...

i love it! and i have to agree with the sentiment that love is a fleeting and double edged sword a 10 in my book!

Though i agree that love can be fatal and painful You forgot to mention that it can be joyous too. anyway, great write Heart

I like this with the metaphor of the blade being like love. You're right; love is a blade; many like to play with it but it often slips through the fingers and hurts us. Fortunately wounds heal leaving scars reminding us to not do the same thing again! Keep up the good work! :)