Tuesday, January 5, 2016

Dagger Comments

Rating: 5.0

Insert deep into my heart
Let the blood clot inside
This knife is meant for that
It is a gift from my sweetheart
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 06 January 2016

Superb... I am hanging it since then Unable to take it away, instant The last footprints on my heart Has left an image so dark

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Nosheen Irfan 06 January 2016

Wowww. What an amazing depiction of love and betrayal. And the use of dagger as a symbol of pain is remarkably appropriate. Indeed, every loss and deceit hurts us like a dagger. Deserving no less than 10.

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Kelly Kurt 05 January 2016

Amazing poem, Mohammed. None can hurt deeper than those we love. A 10+

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M. Asim Nehal

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