Daffodils On The Hill Comments

Indeed, a lovely poem! thanks for sharing, Dom!

It reminds me Daffodils. Memories and dreams both crushed Nothing stays the same beautiful write.

Yor exquisite poem outshines d soulful undercurrent theme endin on a positive beauty note of dafodils. Pls review my latest on NATURE too.

i enjoyed this for being mostly-understandable, optimistic, and not too long. you fit a lot in. in the line: .....Love had died and rotted there....did a person who was a lover or loved one die and get buried on the hill which later sprouted daffodils? ? really, i'm serious. really! but if a loved one died and was so missed, i wonder about some other parts you write.....such as: in the line: .....Sadness fades then grows to joy....if the sadness fades i think that is fine, but it sounds like you are saying that the sadness becomes joy, which doesn't sound right to me. how about 'sadness fades and joy grows'? ? ? in the line: .....Memories and dreams both crushed....if what i suspected above happened, why would memories be crushed? i can understand dreams being crushed, but wouldn't memories live on? ? despite how critical i may seem, i plan to send this to my poemlist. it seems i'm finding poems more often recently that i like enough to send to the list for possible later reading and a reminder to look at the authors' works in the future. long live poemhunter! ! ! thanks for sharing. i particularly enjoyed the following: Light chases away the dark The sun finally kills the cold Love emerges where you don't expect You can dance again Laughter echos from within that's great to hear, :) bri

good write, thanks, I invite you to read my poems and comment.

Nothing stays the same. Hope eternal. Nice write.