~ Daffodil ~ Comments
Across the rolling springtime hill
In grande array the sunshine spill
Of golden heads address the sky
With floral perfume rising high;
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Dearest Linda - you and William W would make a good team. Superlative poetry from a leonine mistress of verse. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Lovely, just lovely Linda, a beautiful poem set in a field of daffodils. Enough to set your heart alight and bring joy to the soul. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
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8/13/2025 10:46:05 AM # 1.0.0
You mentioned this poem in replying to my 'Lara' poem . So I thought I would come by and see which of you had the best Daffodil poem between you and Goldy Locks. I haven't read her's yet . I did want to echo , in general terms what the other commentators have said . Yoonoos probably said it best , when he referred to a mature piece of poetry . In fact , it is nearly perfect . It has only one technical flaw . Otherwise , it's an easy ten in all other aspects and one of the best 'rhythm and rhyme' poems I have read here . One question . Do you know what that flaw is? Greenwolfe 1962 ( I love this poem , this is what poetry is supposed to be .)