Wednesday, July 23, 2008

Daddy, Why Can'T You Keep Me Dry? Comments

Rating: 5.0

a daughter sits to read to her father
an empty seat staring back at her
she starts with a word and realizes its no use
she sits outside on the curb in the rain
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Lois doyle
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silver phoenix 01 August 2008

couldnt agree less with greenwolfe, keep it up! If time permits please read and rate some of my work, thank you. Kilian

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Greenwolfe 1962 23 July 2008

I knew it, I knew it when I saw the title. I should not read this poem. But I did. Everything was just as predicted. I should have just not read the poem. I should have just given it the 10 and moved on. GW62

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