Daddy What If? Comments

Outstanding piece by great poet 10++

What a 'Modern Poem'!

What would happen then if sun stops to shine the world if the wind stop to blow around if the green grass stop to grow up more Oh What would happen then if writer stop to love his parents or if writer stop to love his beloved What would happen then maybe love would lose it's own shining like the rising sun, freedom like wind blowing, graceful like the green little

If you stopped lovin' me then the grass would stop growin' The sun would stop shinin' and the wind would stop blowin' So you see if you wanna keep this old world a goin' You better start lovin' me again again you better start lovin' me again You hear me Bobby you better start lovin' me again You love me Bobby you better start lovin' me again........it's a poem of love through enjoyable poetic expression; delightful to read this one

A lovely, poignant poem, by a poet with a generous sense of humanity...

True love much needed! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The chids inquisitiveness has become the dads anguish and his (dad's) craves for the childs love which for him is the light and life. A great poem

So you see if you wanna keep this old world a goin' You better start lovin' me again ….Love makes the world go round! Wonderful!

I like this poem very much, kids full questions,

whats the theme of the poem