James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Friday, September 20, 2019

Daddy The Gym Teacher Comments

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Daddy he moved my panties and,
hush child and come here.
Did he do this with his finger,
moving your panties and then with the other finger
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Bri Edwards 21 September 2019

p.s. p.s. in my last comment here, i see PH edited out " v a g i n a" ! ! ! flower = v-a-g-i-n-a in some of O'Keefe's paintings, or so some say/guess.

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Bri Edwards 21 September 2019

p.s. more... is Daddy, also, " taking advantage of" /abusing of the girl? ? will Mommy handle the situation? will police be notified? does this come from an experience YOU had? ? i'm thinking back... OK, " Daddy's Little Girl" , your 'next poem' is itching to be read. PH keeps flipping to it! ! and the photo: Georgia O'Keefe. flower =? ? bri :)

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Bri Edwards 21 September 2019

I've sent you a private PH message. i wonder if " Daddy" IS The Gym Teacher, OR are those the words the girl used to start her story, but a comma is 'needed' after Daddy (for me to understand well) . actually, i think it IS the latter and i just realized it. i think " startled" fits, but seems a bit mature for a (young) girl to use here. to MyPoemList. bri :) will anyone else care/dare to comment? ? ?

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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