Monday, February 7, 2011

Daddy's Little Girl (Or So He Thought) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've been kicked around
Pushed down
Be told so many lies
Hiding in the darkness
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Solibella gonzalez
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susheela Shiju 17 November 2018

you expressed your thoughts so beautifully...keep writing dear God is with you...my 10

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 07 February 2011

why is pain so much felt in your poem? why are the scenes so clear? why is hate very evident? i am sad with your poem, but i feel glad at the same time bec it means you are good for making me feel that way, you are one good poet. Hey, life is not forever sad.... don, t worry.

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