Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Daddy's Little Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

A fartherly figure my young life did lack,
Now for some reason, you thought you'd come back,
Tell me the truth, daddy, do you even care?
Tell me the truth, daddy, why were you never there?
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Autum Foster
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Autumn Jones 21 July 2009

I can identify with this at least a little. It is very good and it tells it like it is. When a parent leaves your life early on and then tries to come back after you've grown up enough to think for yourself, it just sometimes doesn't work. You can't automatically give love to someone who wasn't there to build it with. Thank you so much for this poem.10+++++ -Autumn

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