Tuesday, September 2, 2008

Daddy's Little Defect Comments

Rating: 2.7

Daddy's little girl,
so innocent and profound,
so sweet as sugar,
but behind the mask is where the enemy lays,
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Kayla Corinne Beneteau
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Rajinder Singh 01 February 2010

you have to fight your own battles others can only support you.Be strong

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Wow, that's really deep stuff. I can tell you reached deep within yourself to write that. And I know it's not easy to admit things like that. Great poem though, it flows really well.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 02 September 2008

very touching! keep writing! I like the words, 'help me please', she lives no more. could you read and comment on my poems too, specially the new ones?

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