Friday, December 16, 2005

Daddy's Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

Little girl, what happened in your small world?
Were you Daddy's desire, his little girl?
A woman now, your life has been lost,
Fantasies and pleasure were taken at your cost.
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Keri Jopplin
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Bonnie Harding 01 December 2009

Sometimes being 'Daddy's girl' sucks! Writing helps, even if you sugar coat it and pretend he was really sorry and just ill.Only someone that lived it could write it so well.

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Ernestine Northover 29 December 2005

A very painful poem but very well written, a difficult subject to put into words. I had to read it all the way through, it flowed. I loved the line 'Will it be different when you climb the stairs? ' this said everything in that one line. A really well constructed write. Love Ernestine XXX

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