Daddy's Darling...Or Not Comments

well sania i dont know whether the poem is autobiographical or not i hope not but a lovely write shows how much you love ur dad :))

ohhhhhhhh such a sad lovely poem.......well penned

Your poem is penned beautifully and very touchy too. Keep up.

a very touching poem, Sania...plz..keep on writing...u're a gifted one...and ur standard is beyond ur age...

This is really a good poem.

great job sania.keep writing

interesting read! really hope it is not by personal experience. beautifully illustrated!

very moving sania...im glad you decided to share your work with me...this was the first time i recieved your message...you write well...with pain in your soul...as many poets do....well done.

Very nice i like how you put this poem.. Its very strong i like the words and the set up that you have used.. thank you so much for sharing..

Sania - there's a very prominent streak of true emotion here, a red thread of pain and grief...beautiful write! Thanks for sharing.10 from me. Keep it up, Caroline

Sania, this is very good. Very good indeed. You have a real instinct for writing poetry and you can't 'learn' that - you're born with it, I believe. Of course your theme is very strong and emotionally compelling, but you have shaped your stanzas with style and just the right amount of repetition and rhyme. I wonder if your title is too obvious, though? 'Daddy's Darling' would say it all and the understated is often much more powerful than the obvious. Just a thought. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Fantastic! It's really great. How touching..full of emotions..grief or anger I may never know for I feel mixed emotions! You have made your readers think and cry late at night for this poem! A great piece!

very touchy....! ......penned beautifully! 10++++

really touching and innocent poem good rhymes 10+

hey i know how u feel i lost my mom too it's hard at first, but then you find a way out of it because any kid could do any change they want. I done it so you could do one too. You just need a bite of time.

Spelling of drops need to be corrected, the whole written with enough rhymes, the facts shown clear about the diary life....not like imagination, it is a fact.Thank you for sharing this a good piece.

How can someone so young sing words so sad.. You have talent young girl..10/10