Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Daddy's Bleeding Out Comments

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The black flesh will tear and the dark blood will flow
So much hate, the sharp pain raises form below
As he bleeds out the ones closest to him will go
They scream and sob, they will all die slow
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Stephanie Blodgett
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James Mclain 03 June 2009

Stephanie, i did not mind the lent as the story unfolded in a harsh brutal light of reality..plant a rose..in this persons heart while the eye still sees..iip

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Stephanie Blodgett

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