Thursday, March 22, 2018

Daddy, Please Comments

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Daddy, please wake up,
Please, don't go away,
Don't leave me here unguided,
Please, daddy, stay with me.
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Krystal McLennan
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 March 2018

Tonight you left me here, Wondering if I did something wrong. Why didn't you say you loved me one more time? I'm lost in this world without you. daddy, son or daughter. love, care, concern, absence, death. so powerfully portrayed.......... thank you dear poet. it touched me.. tony

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Krystal Mclennan 22 March 2018

Please, no hate on this one...It is a bit of a personal one for me and wouldn't like comments on it that are hurtful. But feel welcomed to leave some advice in the comments below! :)

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