Monday, January 18, 2010

Daddy Part Three Comments

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There used to be a time where happy families existed
And the love never died out, the longing for love persisted
You and mum once had that love; it soon came to an end
Maybe it was best for us all, maybe a god send
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Tess Connor
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Virginia Pecho Gely 30 December 2011

Parenthood is not an easy task. Being a child is not an easy one either. Giving up a father is not easy. A poem of suffering but a sort of surrender to apaise the climate. A great write...a thunderstorm of emotions....Thanks for sharing the depthness of your write. Virginia

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Edgar Andrade Baguio 21 May 2010

This is quite serious than the first one...the lines are getting deeper. Nice write Tess...nice one..

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