Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Daddy Lied Comments

Rating: 2.7

Why do you lie to me?
You get my hopes up so high.
Why don't you just tell me?
But instead you make me cry.
...
Read full text

Candy Simpson
COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 29 September 2014

You must have gone through a lot of pains for such lying by your daddy. Very painful indeed. At night before I close my eyes, A tear rolls down my cheek, Because I think of the lies you told, Throughout this passing week - Very touchy! I have rated this poem 9/10.

0 0 Reply
Candy Simpson

Candy Simpson

Manchester
Close
Error Success