Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Daddy Im A Fox Comments

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Daddy i'm a fox
An daddy I am free
Can’t put me in a box
Cos daddy that’s not me
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foxy babii
COMMENTS
Noha El3wdy 24 May 2009

you are totally right nice, keep up

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Scott Austin 24 December 2008

You have expressed your feelings of freedom very well in this write…but try to understand that Daddy’s only want to protect their young from any harm or misfortune….may peace and joy fill your heart each and every day….stay safe and free. Scott

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Nia Riz 29 September 2008

hey! ! ! ...good poem....nice rhyming scheme and fun to read....do write more and more...

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