Monday, May 19, 2014

'Daddy, I Love You' Comments

Rating: 4.2

'Daddy, I...'
Shut up by hard labor for the night, my child says bye
That's when I take off my mask
Worn to show my child I'm strong-as if my tears are stored in a cask
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Kazi Maisha
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Swimming in the sea of Sadness. Well done again my friend!

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Akhtar Jawad 30 May 2014

Maximum killings of humans were made in the name of religion, but if you carefully study you will come on conclusion that the killers were not sincere to their religion even. They just exploited religos sentiments for the sake of imperialism. You have written an impressive poem.

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Matthias Pantaleon 28 May 2014

What can I say...I am indeed humble by your piece and am short of words. Considering your age and the skills you display here on this beautiful stanza, that shows you have places to go as a poetess. Hope to see you in high places as a distinguished poetess as the years unfold itself. Beautiful poem, full of depth and diction. Thanks for sharing!

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Children indeed motivate the best in us. Powerful perspective my friend!

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Children indeed motivate the best in us. Powerful perspective my friend!

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 19 May 2014

Hello Kazi I must say this is just awesome piece! Loyd

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