Daddy Don'T Leave! Comments

Loss, separation, the accompanying pangs!

i love the emotion in this! its so powerful i enjoy reading your poems

i understand where you come from with that, my dad left before i was born and i bet millions of kids across the world could say the same

soo well expressed! ! thats soooo not kool what he did! ! D: <

AWW......so cute i think its reallly good.

aww. that was really good, but really sad..-_-