Thursday, June 25, 2009

Daddy Come Back! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wonder if you think of me?
I wonder if you cry because you miss me?
I wonder if you love me?
the thoughts are making me go crazy i need you because the hole is getting bigger the hurt is getting deeper, and my heart is being torn to shreds
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Anju Addanki 25 June 2009

Daddy come back is wonderful. Thw wordings are very nice and i felt the pain as well.10 vote

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i know what this feels like, i like the way you portrayed the feelings..10+ if you could plz comment on one of my poems, i would be so greatful.. thanks, alicia roseberry

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