Wednesday, February 1, 2006

Daddy Can You Hear Me Comments

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Daddy up there beyond the clouds, can you hear me
do you sense my inner turmoil, the sense of loss that will not flee
Daddy I'm afraid cause I dont know what to do
why couldent I just go with you
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Crystal Nealey
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Solomon Brook 01 February 2006

Other than the overuse of some linking words, it was a solid expression poetically. If your daddy don't hear you Crystal, certainly I do.

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