Wednesday, August 27, 2008

Daddy... Comments

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I walk in the room
And feel you’re presence
I feel you’re near
People think I’m crazy,
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black broken heart
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Brooke Luchich 12 July 2009

Great poem. Beautifully written. Sorry about your dad!

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So touching. Really nice. Every child needs a daddy. But one of the saddest things in the world is that many dads are not around. Please let me know what you think of my poem

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Private Griffin 27 September 2008

That was very nice, I'm not going to be like other ppl and say stupid stuff like....'don't worry it'll all work out' or whatever. But one thing I can say is, keep up the good work.

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Scott Austin 04 September 2008

This a very touching piece you have written here, thank you for sharing it with us. May you find peace and joy you are seeking deep within your heart once again. Scott

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black broken heart

black broken heart

in the arms of my love
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