Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Daddy Comments

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Sometimes I think of all you have done.
Tell me, when I was born, why did you run?
Was Coke more important in your world?
More important then your own little girl?
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Brooke McMinn
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2010

But Mom says that not even once did you smile. You didn't want me, That was clear, But did you really need to get high, With me right there? ...brooke i cried dear while rading your poem. how toujchy it is words to feel how deeply you felt abt it. it ia amazing work...10 u and me are on same lines.. read mine.... papa do you know... papa u too..give me insight if u like it

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