Daddy Comments

Lovely to read, got the techniques down pact but... Em, what does the poem present. The meaning is lost on me! Does he love u and u dont love him? Is he mean? Other than that...yeah, good!

this is a bit worrying this poem - what do you mean to say? '..Even when you growl/ Even when you get up me/... no matter how much you love me/ I'll always mean something to you/

i want to see my dads smile, feel his touch and see him one last time.

Hey Emma, I know how you feel, my dad's the same. Keep that pen to paper.: -)

That is a good poem Em and i like it. Bye from Kell

so heartfelt, thanks for sharing 10