Saturday, October 29, 2005

Daddy Comments

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Tell me dad when you come back home?
Mom won't get a proper sleep nowadays.
She believes that you do not go to sea again.
Mom is jealous sometimes
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nimal dunuhinga
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 07 January 2010

this one is really awesome... nice write sir!

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Matt Mooney 14 November 2009

This poem is a gift to anyone that reads it. Thanks for the gift and I find the story of your biography very interesting. Good luck and keep in touch. Read my 'Exit 9'.

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Sandra Fowler 18 July 2007

Very poignant. You have created a charming little girl here. You seem to have rapport with the feelings of children. Very nice. Warm regards, Sandra

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