Friday, December 28, 2007

Daddy Comments

Rating: 3.2

Are you mad at me?
Daddy.
Do you hate me?
Daddy.
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lilly mandrell
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Adrian Murphy 15 September 2009

A poem full of raw emotion - such sadness and anger. Just goes to prove the old saying about families - can't live with them, can't live without them. Adrian

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januel l 26 December 2008

i love this, i actually have one kind of like this, its great, i understand it

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Scott Austin 12 March 2008

This write is full of powerful emotions, but understand your daddy may only wants what is best for you even though you may not agree with him. Scott

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This is powerful, moving. You swept me up and carried me all the way to the end. Thank you for a lovely ride. Peace, L&T

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Halima Ahmed 28 December 2007

i like this poem! well written

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