Monday, March 3, 2008

Daddy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Daddy,
where are you?
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Sandra jacks
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Ashley Ormon 08 October 2008

This has a lot of emotion in it. They way you penned it together made me feel the pain of an absent father.

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Kt Reynolds 10 March 2008

So much emotion shoved into one poem.... I love it. Good Job!

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Scott Austin 10 March 2008

The pain you feel is expressed very well in your write. May you one day find what you are seeking. May peace and joy fill your once again soon. Scott

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Miss tee 05 March 2008

i understand your pain..emotions expressed similar to my poem 'letter to a father' well written, tx

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