Wednesday, September 6, 2006

Daddy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Daddy please stop hitting me
Can; t you see you're hurting me
You're not only marking my skin
But my soul within
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Laura Hollan
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Chris Fox 12 September 2006

Very touching write. I enjoyed it. It makes anger and remorse all at the same time. Agry at a man, but sympathetic for the child. Very good.

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