Daddy Comments

Like the watchman on the path, peer through the waves, wait patiently, white faced with memory., Very wunderfull..........

there is alot of heart and soul here keep it up

This one escapes me a bit, but the imagery is solid, and the mood is definite. Nice, strong work.

Deep and heartfelt. Unless I am reading it wrong your dad is dead and he lived a full life with no regrets. You are left living, remembering him fondly and keeping the flame alive. Strong poem, that.