Saturday, September 10, 2016

Daddy Comments

Rating: 4.7

It breaks my heart
Knowing your not by my side
That you never will be replaced
As the tears run down my cheek
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Elissa McDonald
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Khairul Ahsan 29 October 2017

A very touchy poem in loving memory of a lost father. Loved your poem.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Elissa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Unknown Spirit 10 September 2016

dear Elissa it seems you have lost your father. i truly and sincerely give my condolence to you. your words convey the mood of missing a precious and as you said unreplacable person in your life but patience is the best option. by gods own permission i belive your father shall be harbored in Eden and lead a peaceful life. i really enjoyed your poem. thanks.

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Elissa Mcdonald 26 October 2017

thank you

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