Thursday, November 10, 2011
Daddy Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Did you think leaving was better
Didn't you hear me call
You said you'd be back
I put my heart in your suitcase
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Margaret Beil
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Eli Anderson
16 November 2011
Greetings. Interesting piece. It took a degree of bravery to illustrate the pain (whether biographical or not) , you were feeling. Favourite line: 'I put my heart in your suitcase'. OL, Eli
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7/28/2025 12:55:06 PM # 1.0.0
Brilliant Margaret, a hard hitting yet lovely poem with lots of feeling and emotions.