Daddy Comments

i dont have a dad.... my teacher dont either -=[ =[ =[ rip

It is a good God's gift to have a dad.

This was good at least u know ur dad my dad left my mom when i was like born or something like that long story...but you go through can make u stronger u just gotta believe that you can make it...don't worry bout what others thing cuz they dont matter only u do...u gotta stand up and show everyone that ur tougher than they are don't let anyone else tell u otherwise...just remember one thing for sure u are who u make urself to be

Yeah well I just wish he know how hurt I am... I'm not good at rightin poems.. Cheers caitlin

i know this sound tough but u can't change yr dad but u can change u sweetheart u have to get on with yr life and hey you have a gift for writing get into it. I like your ryheme it rocks,

R u all talking to me or megan...thanks.illy try right new one soon.

This is a very good poem. I am sorry to hear that, he is never around... I know how that feels with my mother.

lovely tribute from a grateful child anjali

well expressed piece Caitlin......there's a love here...like no other....great work...keep penning you have a gift for writing my friend

Bit his been through heaps with my mum.: (

NO.my dad is not good either he live like 30 min from my house never comes see me never rings me.we. Talk 1 in 2 months. He changed since he remarried..yeah my mum n dad split wen I was 8..

you have a good father cherish him..mine isnt the best in the world he was never around and is hooked on cocain going on 10 years now..

Yeah in 3 years it will as I'm can make my own choice as I'll be 18 ..thanks...yeah I'm in yr 9 n still can't read good or spell good.but I don't care I'll get better one day.. :) . :) .

I really like this poem, even though it didnt go into depth it showed your pain for someone who you cant see :) hope it gets better and fyi milica franchi for someone telling someone they have spelling errors you cant spell as well, so leave us alone who cant spell for I am one of them :) Spell check is my best friend Lovely poem

Ok.well I'll just leave it as I can't spell or read well..lol Thanks.xox

Good job! Keep it up!

I like the poem, keep on writing, but you have few mistakes in there, so go back to ' Menage my poems' and edit it............

This is the first poem I wrote..hope u all like it