Sunday, December 21, 2008

Daddy Comments

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Daddy,
am i really a disappointment?
dont i ever reach,
a high enough level of perfection?
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Scott Austin 30 December 2008

Really enjoyed the read, it is very nicely penned. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Try to see it this way, appearances give off impressions of yourself. I am sure you Dad knows you are very smart young lady when it comes to learning, but he may feel that you are giving off the wrong impression of yourself by wearing those short shorts and short dresses. Scott

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 December 2008

being yourself is the most perfect-and doing that naturally is great- avery honest and straight poem-10

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