Friday, August 19, 2005

Dad's Childhood. Comments

Rating: 3.9

Underground, down in the dugout
when during the second world war
a siren wailed a last warning
before the darkest pall... plunging;
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Gillian.E. Shaw
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Ana Monnar 18 August 2007

It sounds so scary, but true. Great write!

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Raynette Eitel 19 August 2005

I remember reading this one earlier and you have done some work on it. It seems tighter now and more focused, if I remember correctly. Glad to have you back online. I've missed your work. Raynette

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