Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Dad Is Sun, Mom Is Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

the sun
is generous
as dad
in his love
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john tiong chunghoo
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Sandra Fowler 09 May 2006

Applause for your spare and elegant poem.. Warm regards, Sandra

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a near perfect poem...lovely indeed and a 10 from me!

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R H 09 May 2006

I love the resounding simplicity of this poem John, really beautiful. Kind regards, Justine.

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john tiong chunghoo

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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