Saturday, May 31, 2008

Dad If Only Comments

Rating: ★4.5

Dad if only you could see
What you have done to me
Why have you done it all?
Why did you let me fall?
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mmmnjbni jhbkjnbkjlnio 20 July 2008

Strong and vivid poem! !

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Adrian Wait 31 May 2008

A powerful poem, so many words no longer left unsaid, excellent writing..I wish you all the very best. Adrian

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Coach Roth 31 May 2008

Maybe you are better off...be proud that you continue to try and be the best...Coach

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