Dad, Dark Demons, And Memories Comments

Speaking as someone who knows something about demons and barbed hedges, they are only insurmountable to those who have no desire to try. I am sure you will succeed and, as for your poem, it is sweet and sad and the lines work well together to create strong and solid images. Good workJoy

This is brilliant Vincent, and something I wish my two son's would do. It is a form of grieving and does wonders to lighten the load. Believe me, I know. It brought a tear to my eye as skimming stones, was a fav of their dad's, all I can say to you is do not let those dark demon lock you out of what life is about, and that is loving and enjoying it. I am sure you are a strong man, if you are anything like your father sounds. I don't believe they ever leave your heart, so make sure it does not go cold. Someone will come and bring love into your life I am sure. 10 from admiring Tai

That's a strong emotional work Vincent. It flows well and the structure is spot on. The opening two lines are great and really conjure up images of a typical English seaside. Small typo in the third line. A cracking work.