Friday, June 27, 2008

Dad Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tears stream down
In an eternal river
My nose sniffles
My backbones gone a-quiver
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Chanja Cassini de Thury
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Yekaterina Bezpalaya 13 September 2008

Your dad loves you alot man. I'm so friggin deliriously happy for you :)

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Cassini De Thury Jluc 02 July 2008

your words are pieces of art cruising together to my heart.......

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Aisha Love 27 June 2008

beautiful poem and a very beautiful ending but very emotional...10

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