Dad, we watched you wither away
All of eighty kilos by night and day
The one and only saving grace,
Was your ever smiling face.
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I liked this one. beautifully versed..... read mine papa do u know? and papa u too
Oh Sandra...how u weave these emotions so heartily...every word is a intense filler of those voids in the aggrieved heart.. +10
Such a beautiful poem, I was reading it and couldn't help but cry. thank you with love kat sorrow
A most beautiful and deeply touching poem Sandra. A very fitting tribute to your father. Best wishes, Andrew.
that reminded me of my dad..whom i lost a month back..he was different, he went for the treatment when it was not necessary..i have written 'losing a baby ' on that experience
dads are super important and that really hits when people's dads are sick and tell their feelings.(i'm not sure if that make sense) . that was really good
Sandra, I'm sure your dad would have been proud of this wonderful tribute to him. Ron
Sandra: What a beautiful poem to your dear Dad.... our dearest Uncle Bill. Very touching and sincere. I really enjoy your poems... Lenna
This is a very lovely tribute to your father, I to am sorry for your loss. Thank you so much for shareing this very touching piece. Welcome to Poemhunter.com 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison
What a lovely tribute for a father. When someone is sick, their bare spirit seems to shine through for the world to see (for better or worse, LOL) and your dad was obviously one of the angels, and I can imagine how much you miss him now. Maybe he is a star out there too, shining his light down over you, a guardian always keeping watch. (smile)