Saturday, February 16, 2013

Dad Comments

Rating: 4.2

Dad
A dad is supposed to be a male figure in which you confide.
A dad is supposed to be by your side when everybody else is against you.
A dad is supposed to defend you all the way.
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Lucy Grainger
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Gnossienne 12 April 2014

A girl's dad is so awesome and powerful I can relate. Sorry to hear of your loss.

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Free Bird 08 May 2013

nice poem. no man will be sincere with u in ur life except ur dad :)

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Titi Dale 17 February 2013

Yep, I get this feeling :) Dad's r the rough guys that sometimes sneak not your room at night and scare u: D hehe. Btw, great poem!

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Sandy Player 17 February 2013

Supposed is such a heavy feeling word with all its s's and p's. Brings the weight of the sentence right through it which is poignant. We can almost hear the ifs sounding around the poem.

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I miss you sandy, I wish you were still around, I hope you're still alive. I miss your wisdom mostly! !

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