Monday, July 19, 2010

Dad Comments

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Sometimes i wonder why i bother
Im nothing to you anymore
I havent been for years
You dont even care
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Nikki Addleton
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Joshua Livengood 19 July 2010

yet again nikki, youve left me baffled. in your poem by the name ' dad ', try finding words that have more meaning to make the matter seem more important. because it is. am i right?

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Nikki Addleton

Nikki Addleton

county durham, united kingdom
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