Saturday, December 26, 2015

Da Vinci Code Comments

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This life is full of 
tittering jeering emptiness 
and unacceptable too,  
so I painted myself like a Hero:
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Bri Edwards 03 February 2016

ok, so you were tripping out on drugs one night when you started to write this. and you changed beer to drink, but i see your note telling of your teetotaling. good boy! i still like the ending. bri ;) p.s. i've heard of Da Vinci Code, but confess i don't know (or forget) what it is about.

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Bright Morn 09 January 2016

typing mistake in 7th line. anf instead of and.

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