/// Da Vince Riddle /// Comments

ahmed, wonderful........i am speechless!

unsolvable Da Vince riddle..I don't know what the poem meant to me? ? so I can not solve the riddle as it is too complicated and difficult? ? ? Please compose the poem in more structure and leave spaces or split them into paragraphs for easy reading..? ? ?

Unbelievable! ! ! ! ! words can kill! ! ! ! i am just not good enough to judge your poem! ! ! !

good poem. indeed lines do appear. as deep thinkers and poets we are stuck between them. i ask all poets to read my poem Between The Lines it was written for you.

An absolutely beautiful, brilliant poem! ! !

'words/worlds', yes, indeed. Ahmed, for me, this piece is a 'stream of consciousness' text and a fine ride to the reader is provided. As for riddles, I'm not much for them. I do notice, however, that you include eye-blink-swift references to much more modern icons and images than are covered by 'renaissance/medieval' tags, no? Anyhow, you made me smile again. - B.E.P.

Sweet talk must be from heart if just heartless write it will be meaningless...Think it deep and Plato will agree with me if he still alive_Unwritten Soul

Lovely writing, this is very abstract and beautiful. Keep at it.

Amit Ray must be smile read this, his name just everywhere in your poem :) and the collision of ideas and philosophy also find in many spots.. with great thinking is you so i cant say/write nothing more than...Once again i have to say thanks for inviting and sharing.., very nice write one but i am not belong to this poem, keep it up_Unwritten Soul

Wonderful poem.....Very well written my friend :)