In the tribe of Dan,
A son was born,
To father Manoah
And mother Zorah.
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Good job Simple Simon, The story of Samson is one of my favorites from the bible. Sadly, it demonstrates how the heart wants what it wants and how a man will sometimes sacrifice everything at the request of a beautiful woman. The fault lies not just with the woman in each particular case but also with the man. As you are demonstrating in your poems, it is a common theme in the bible repeated many times, always with tragic results for someone. The man in many cases is motivated by an all consuming passion. Consider this exerpt that references Samson and Delilah from my poem, 'My Lovers Eyes'. 'Madly, deeply, hopelessly I love her! And she knows I am a transparent liar, And she knows I would be lying to myself and to her If I were to suggest I could ever refuse her anything. I think this is what caused Samson all the trouble. He could never say no to Delilah. Still, he loved her and sought to please her, Up until the moment the Philistines gouged out his eyes.' Anyway, I like your poem. Maybe you could write one about the death of John the Baptist at the hands of a man ensnared by a foolish promise.
Samson is a tragic but heroic figure in the Bible. His splendid strength never ceases to amaze the reader. You have captured him so well in these fine lines, Simon. Warm regards, Sandra