One of the most sorrowful days
when Subjects all, diverted gaze
fell upon noble Princes and Earl
her standard loyally lovingly unfurled
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I envy your deft use of rhyme and meter. Most of my poems are free verse, but I have a great appreciation for well-executed form in verse. Many people who use rhyme settle for the wrong word, simply to force the rhyme. Your rhymes and half-rhymes seem natural and right. Good work. Cheers.
I love reading medieval murder mysteries and this blends right in.